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Oh this was such a joy to read! The haiku were amazing too. 🤩

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Thank you Melinda! So glad you liked it <3

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The idea of adding haikus in between a piece of fiction is so creative and something I never would have thought of doing. I love how the rush of the morning commute turns into a beautiful moment of connection here—so well-written in such a short space!

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Thank you so much Ramya, that means a lot 🫶🏽

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I keep forgetting that litrature can be anything you want it to be, be it sprinkling several haikus in a short story. Thanks not only was it a good read but also opened my mind up for new possibilities again.

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Paper Offerings Haiku *chefs kiss* awesome work 👏👏

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Hehe thank you Hayden!

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Excellent. A very enjoyable read.

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Thank you David!!

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Love seeing your amazing words travel to new places 💛😘

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Aww thank you Ella 🥰

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Thank you Suhail! Writing is so much fun when you experiment with the forms and styles you love most ☺️

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